Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea
There location I live there.
There is
There are existence
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic
point. because There has international airport and harbor
I grew up Incheon.
In + a city
I grew up in Incheon.
There is a major traffic point.
Incheon is a major
traffic point.
Because
Conjunctive adverb It also joins two sentences.
Incheon is a major
traffic point because Incheon has an international airport and a harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to
speak in English to someone.
It
It
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just
tell me!
Form anyone
third person singular base
form s + es
Want to
“wanna”
I want to play soccer.
Wanna, gonna, etc. NOT the standard written form. You can find in chatrooms, text message etc.
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash
decision. But, ironically it is demerit
that i have a lot of things on my mind.
Incorrect use of a conjunction. but
And my another Hobby, computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played
all day long last year. So i couldn`t
studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
suddenattack Sudden Attack
much that i played Capitalize the pronoun I.
year.
So Incorrect use of a conjunction
....... But i really like
I really like my school.
Don’t you? Tag questions ask
for agreement.
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’.
So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
So
Incorrect use of a
conjunction
that mean
form third singular subject + base form + s
or es
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a
state called Gwangju.
south korea
capitalize the names of
countries
Some country names use ‘the.’ The United States, the United Kingdom, the
Philippines
When I get diet, I do some exercise (
jogging etc ). At this time, I loose weight and my body get more healtier.
I get diet
Go on a diet
I do some exercise ( jogging etc ).
Like, such as, for
example
I do some exercise, like
jogging.
I loose weight
Wrong word loose\
Correct word lose
my body get
form third person singular + base form + s
or es
more healtier
form of a comparative
adjective
Healthy, healthier
When the opportunity, i wants to do boxing
later.
When the opportunity
Missing subject\
Missing verb
When I have the
opportunity,
i wants to do boxing later
Capitalize I
Form first singular subject + base form
How to be healthy, first, I evenly eat a
lot of food.
How to be healthy
Rhetorical question, a question that doesn’t expect to be
answered.
first
Don’t use rhetorical
questions.
I evenly eat a lot of food.
I don’t know what this
means.
I should exercise every day, because These
days Increased my body weight.
These
These doesn’t need to be
capitalized.
Increased
Increased doesn’t need to
be capitalized.
These days Increased my body weight
These days I’m gaining
weight.
Jogging and push ups on the night
Get up early in the morning.
To ride a school bus
Eat slowly,eat evenly
Jogging and push ups on the night
Missing subjects missing
verbs
I go jogging and I do
push ups at night.
Get up early in the morning.
To ride a school bus
Missing subject
I get up early in the
morning to ride the school bus.
Eat slowly,eat evenly
I eat slowly.
eat evenly
I don’t understand what
this means.
I like every exercise and activity! so I`m
enough healthy
! exclamation point goes at the end of a sentence not in
the middle
I`m enough healthy
Word order
Enough + a noun. I drink enough water.
Adjective + enough I’m healthy enough.
I don't now why that deleted. Sorry to
Proffessor So Now I replay to write assingment.
I replay to write
rewrite
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