One of my Favorite Restaurants Corrections

One of my Favorite Restaurants Corrections

What items are on the menu?

There are many kinds of item on the menu. For example jajangmyean , jjangbbong, Tray jajangmyean others are on the menu.

Items

. For example,  jajangmyean , jjangbbong  and Tray jajangmyean are on the menu.

Jajangmyean -> noodles with bean sauce.

Jjangbbong  -> spicy noodles with seafood and soup,  Spicy seafood noodle soup*

Tray jajangmyean  Noodles in a black bean sauce served on a tray*

 

My favorite restaurant is mom's touch in Koreatech.
There are so many menu.
My favorite food is 싸이burger.

My favorite restaurant is mom’s touch located in Koreatech.

There are so many food to choice in the menu.

So many foods to choose from on the menu

My favorite food is thigh burger.

mom's touch in Koreatech. Mom’s Touch in Koreatech.

There are so many menu. There are so many items on the menu.

My favorite food is 싸이burger. My favorite item on the menu is Psy burger…..

My favorite restaurant is Mom’s Touch, located near the front entrance of Koreatech.

My favorite item on the menu is the Psy burger.

This is buffet restaurant. Menu has only one list.

This is buffet restaurant. -> It is buffet restaurant.

Menu has only one list. -> This restaurant has only one item on the menu.

This is a buffet restaurant. You can eat many foods.

 

There is a lot of food on the menu.
For example, grilled pork belly, steamed rice bowl, miso soup and many drinks.

There are a lot of foods on the menu.

miso soup    fermented soybean soup

 

 

 

It wraps up grind meat and some vegetables in dough like pizza’s dough but it is as small as palm’s size.

Dumplings / countable, usually plural

 

MacDonald is worldwide American restaurant. There are lots of menu.

McDonald is a worldwide American restaurant. There are lots of items of menu.

 

Also It has different menus. For example Fried vegetable, noodles, some drinks etc. Many people are there. Why do I like this restaurants? Because It is my first restaurants with my girlfriend in Chun an. When I came to Chun an first time. I said to her "I want to eat korean fast food." She took me to there. And another reason is that I've been to many korean fast food, but 떡볶이나라 is the best , also quantity and quality are good value for money. So I like to go there.

Also it has lots of items on the menu. 

For example, Fried vegetable, noodles and some drinks etc.

For example, there are fried vegetables, noodles, some drinks and etc.*

There are many people in the restaurant.

Why do I like this restaurant?

I like this restaurant because it is the first restaurant in Cheonan that I went to with my girlfriend.

 

 

I like Korean food. One of my favorite restaurants is located right here in Cheonan. It's called LA북창동순두부찌개. This restaurant's soft tofu stew is very delicious. On the menu, there are normal soft tofu stew, dumpling soft tofu stew, sea food soft tofu stew and so on. I like sea food soft tofu stew better than the others.
To get there: Take the 400 bus in the direction of Cheonan. Ride for 40 minutes. Get off at the Cheonan bus terminal stop. Walk about 50 meters. It's cross the Arario park. It is 2nd floor on a building. You can find it.

Nice work

 

 

If you have a some time, I recommend that you go there.

have some time       time NC

On the menu there is just two selection. Cow sirloin and Cow sashimi.
There are many side dishes like raw garlics, onions and some fresh lettuce.

There are just two selections on the menu.

Cow sirloin and Cow sashimi.

Beef sirloin and beef sashimi.

raw garlics

garlic NC

 

Actually, all of the food that Mad for Garlic serve has many garlic as its name by various recipe like boiled garlic or fry garlic.

Actually, all of the food that Mad for Garlic serves has a lot of garlic as its name by various recipe like boiled garlic or fry garlic.

and is called boiled garlic or fried garlic.

Grilled Beef Tripe is made of intestines(?) of a cow.

Tripe is one of the stomachs of a cow.

[Correct]I like this restaurant because they serves Kimchi bean sprouts soup for [an] appetizer.

they serves     they serve

Last Night

Last Night

 

Last night I had dinner with some friends of mine.  First we ate pork at a local restaurant.  Then we went to a friend’s house.  We listened to some music.  After we listened to music, we decided to go to Yawoori. 

                  We hung out in Yawoori for a while and then I felt tired.  I said goodbye to my friends before I got into a cab and went home.

Use the simple past tense to talk about finished actions.
Pay attention to irregular simple past forms.
Use words to put events in order, such as first, then, after, before, and next.

The Graduate Corrections

The Graduate Corrections

One man has recently graduated from a university. and he come back to home.

university. and

incorrect use of a conjunction

university and

university. He

he come back

form  third person singular + base form + s/es

He comes back...

 

 

After that , Benjamin go to Elaine's wedding and he run away with Elaine.

Why do I still have to correct mistakes about the form of the simple present tense?

 

But she has affair with Benjamin.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

But she

She

has affair

Use “a/an” or “the” with the singular form of countable nouns

Has an affair

 

Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine. So when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

After/ When Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine.

Spelling truly

when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

When Elaine gets married, Benjamin takes his true love and runs away.

Conjunctions join verbs in a list.

 

 

So he nervous about his future.

he feels/ is / gets nervous about his future.

Ben is timid, stupid person and Ben represents difficulties of a young adult.

Ben is timid, stupid person

Use “a/an” or “the” with the singular form of countable nouns

Ben is a timid, stupid person

Ben is a timid and stupid person

Conjunctions join adjectives in a list.

Mrs. Robinson is selfish and greed person.

Use “a/an” or “the” with the singular form of countable nouns

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greed person.

Noun greed\ adjective greedy

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greedy person.

Mrs Robinson represents American middle class to like pleasure of the moment.

Ben is a typical student in the early 20's appearance.

Ben : timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson : very very attractive, erotic

Ben is timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson is very very attractive, erotic

 

I think Ben shows us about 20's worries. This movie shows also what we have to do in the future.

 

 

In a word, very interesting. To me, the movie ‘The Graduate’ has fresh topic. Throughout the moive time, I watch the movie with concentration. And I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I. Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy. This movie gets good grade from film critic. The movie was pretty funny.

I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I.

how did I.     what would I do?

Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson

Anne Bancroft who plays Mrs. Robinson

 

 

 

It was a good movie except for one thing. I can't find the relevance of the title and the content.

 

I'm bored at first, but increasingly it caused tension in the movie. The film makes me know not human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

The film makes me know not only human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

Not only A, but also B

One of my Favorite Restaurants

One of my favorite restaurants is located right here in Chungcheon Nam Do.  It’s called 꺼먹돼지.  The pork is excellent.  The owner of the restaurant raises the pigs on his farm which is located a few kilometers away from the restaurant.  He even grows the vegetables for the side dishes.  His wife’s kimchi is very spicy and a little sour.  The scallion kimchi is my favorite.  It’s a korean barbecue restaurant, so you cook the meat yourself over coals.  I think it’s fun to flip the meat over with a pair of tongs and to cut the meat into bite-sized pieces with a pair of scissors. I like to add a little bit of sea salt while the meat is cooking.  If you like, you can also grill onions, rice cake, and garlic while the meat is cooking.  When everything is ready, I like to wrap up a piece of pork, some grilled onions, a sliver of raw garlic, and some red pepper paste in a piece of fresh lettuce.  Mmmm…. Delicious!

 

 

To get there:  Take the 400 bus in the direction of Cheonan.  Ride for about 20 minutes.  Get off at the Dong Woo Apartments stop.  Walk East about 25 meters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is your favorite kind of food?

 

Where do you eat it?

 

What items are on the menu?

 

What is your favorite dish on the menu?

 

How can you get there from campus?

 

Write about your favorite restaurant.

The Graduate

The Graduate

 

Ben has recently graduated from a university.  T or F

 

During the day, Ben goes to many job interviews.  T or F

 

Ben has an affair with Mrs. Robinson.  T or F

 

Elaine is Mrs. Robinson’s younger sister.  T or F

 

Ben and Elaine eventually get married.  T or F

 

 

Describe the setting.

Describe two of the characters.

What do you think about this movie?

Lord of the Flies corrections

Lord of the Flies

Corrections

 

1. Children are missing after plane accident. They hardly survive in uninhabited island. They are divided two groups. One is elected Ralph as leader, the other elected Jack as leader. They regularly collide over decisions. finally Jack's group kills Ralph's group except Ralph.

2. Ralph : Leadership , Equality , Peace , Nokill

 Jack : Cruel , Power , Murder , Desire to be recognized by children

3. I think the movie show human nature. Human have a lot of freedom, they erupt human nature. For example, At first Jack dosen't want kill friends. But finally Jack dosen't mind about it. So human has evil everyday. We must think about it.

 

1) Describe the setting.

A plane fell down. there are some children in plane. children were isolated in uninhabited island. they made two groups for survival. they came into conflict each other.

 

2) Describe two of the characters.

One character is Ralph. he is intelligent so he became a leader.

the other character is Jack. he is ambitious so he disappointed when Ralph became a leader. Later, Jack lead some children who support him.

 

 3) What do you think about this movie?

 I feel discomfort because I seem see dark side in human. this movie shows human nature. as time goes on, they reveal their true colors. for example. later, Jack committed a murder. he didn't feel of guilt. this movie made me bitter.

 

1) Describe the setting.

Flight accident is happen and childrens are isolated in island. And the island is an uninhabited island. And childrens make two group. One group's leader is Ralph and the other group's leader is Jack

 

 

 

2) Describe two of the characters.

Ralph try to suevive many children's. And peaceful leader. He have a positive mind.

I think Jack is a tyrant. he ignore Piggi. And he have a negitive mind. I think Jack's inside is shrouded in fear. But he didn't expresse his mind. And he act as strong.

 

3) What do you think about this movie?

I think this movie's meaning is people reveal brutality by fear. And fear make a Social cut - throat gangsik. And broke the rule, and don't judgement by rational.

 

 

 

Lord of the Flies

A plane crashes in the ocean.  The survivors, who are mostly school children of various ages, use a raft to reach an uninhabited island.  There are beaches and small hills on the island.  The shoreline is either beaches or rocks.  The island is covered with tropical trees, some of which are banana trees.  

Ralph becomes the leader of the group because he is the most responsible member.  He is kind to the younger children.  He is loyal and trustworthy.

Jack enjoys breaking the rules.  He is cruel – especially to Piggy. 

Piggy is overweight.  He is not in good shape.  He is, however, intelligent, rational, and calm.

I think this movie tells us a lot about the dangerous side of human nature.  It also shows that rules are an important part of society.

Lord of the Flies

1)  Describe the setting.

2)  Describe two of the characters.

3)  What do you think about this movie?

Week Three Corrections

Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea.  There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.

 

There     location      I live there.

 

There is

There are     existence

 

I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor

 

I grew up Incheon.

In + a city

I grew up in Incheon.

 

There is a major traffic point.

Incheon is a major traffic point.

 

Because

Conjunctive adverb     It also joins two sentences.

Incheon is a major traffic point because Incheon has an international airport and a harbor.

 

Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.

It

It

 

 

If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!

 

Form    anyone     third person singular      base form s + es

 

Want to  

“wanna”

 

I want to play soccer.

 

Wanna, gonna, etc.         NOT the standard written form.  You can find in chatrooms, text message etc.

 

My merit is that I am prudent.  Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision.  But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.

 

Incorrect use of a conjunction.   but

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And my another Hobby, computer games.

 

 

 

 

 

I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year.  So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?

suddenattack       Sudden Attack

much that i played          Capitalize the pronoun I.

year.  So                             Incorrect use of a conjunction

....... But i really like

 

I really like my school. Don’t you?            Tag questions ask for agreement.

 

 

 

 

 

My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.

So

Incorrect use of a conjunction

 

that mean

form         third singular subject + base form + s or es

 

I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.

south korea

capitalize the names of countries

 

Some country names use ‘the.’     The United States, the United Kingdom, the Philippines

 

 

When I get diet, I do some exercise ( jogging etc ). At this time, I loose weight and my body get more healtier.

I get diet

Go on a diet

 

I do some exercise ( jogging etc ).

Like, such as, for example

I do some exercise, like jogging.

 

I loose weight

Wrong word      loose\

Correct word    lose

 

my body get

form         third person singular + base form + s or es

 

more healtier

form of a comparative adjective

Healthy, healthier

 

When the opportunity, i wants to do boxing later.

 

When the opportunity

Missing subject\

Missing verb

When I have the opportunity,

 

i wants to do boxing later

Capitalize I

Form       first singular subject + base form

 

How to be healthy, first, I evenly eat a lot of food.

 

How to be healthy

Rhetorical question,  a question that doesn’t expect to be answered. 

 

first

 

Don’t use rhetorical questions.

 

I evenly eat a lot of food.

I don’t know what this means.

 

 

I should exercise every day, because These days Increased my body weight.

 

These

These doesn’t need to be capitalized.

 

Increased

Increased doesn’t need to be capitalized.

 

These days Increased my body weight

These days I’m gaining weight.

 

 

 

Jogging and push ups on the night

Get up early in the morning.

To ride a school bus

Eat slowly,eat evenly

 

Jogging and push ups on the night

Missing subjects missing verbs

I go jogging and I do push ups at night.

 

Get up early in the morning.

To ride a school bus

Missing subject

 

I get up early in the morning to ride the school bus.

 

Eat slowly,eat evenly

I eat slowly.

 

eat evenly

I don’t understand what this means.

 

I like every exercise and activity! so I`m enough healthy

 

 

!       exclamation point          goes at the end of a sentence not in the middle

 

I`m enough healthy

Word order

 

Enough + a noun.      I drink enough water.

 

Adjective + enough      I’m healthy enough.

 

I don't now why that deleted. Sorry to Proffessor So Now I replay to write assingment.

 

I replay to write

rewrite

week 2 corrections

Week 2 corrections

And I sometimes play food volleyball with my friends.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much. So if i were hungry, i didn't eat too much.

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much.

Form           to + not + base form

I think the best way to keep fit is to not eat too much.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much, so if i were hungry

if i were hungry, i didn't eat too much.

Not real, but possible             conditional

If I were hungry, I wouldn’t eat too much.

I like playing basketball, so I play a basketball with my friends at weekend.

Play basketball

Exercise is a great way to keep fit. I always do fifty push ups and I play table tennis 2 times a week. I run when I feel good. I sometimes play badminton with my friends at the courts near my apartment

Nice job!!

I sometimes walking and go jogging at night.

Missing verb

Go walking

I usually eat rice, eat fruit.

I usually eat rice and fruit.

I usually eat rice and I eat fruit.

 

 

 

Actually, I seldom exercise and play sports.

seldom

other frequency adverbs        rarely, hardly, often, frequently

Good job!

I often stretch muscles of legs.

I often stretch my leg muscles.

In fact, I do seldom excercise for keep fit regularly. It doesn't mean 'I don't like excercise'. I just do excercise for fun.

Word order

I seldom do exercise

for keep fit regularly

to keep fit

I wake up every morning and 30 minutes in the morning and exercise before going to push up the habit of more than 10 times also use the stairs instead of using the elevator and walk to the nearest distance.

Don’t use Google Translate.

I like play table tennis, badminton. But nowdays I don't do exercise,.Because I'm busy.

Form

Like + to + base form, like + base form + ing

Incorrect use of a conjunction

It is little tired but I can feel that my body is cleansed.

Form

Tired                base form + ed, base form + ing         can be used as adjectives.

Usually, base form + ed describes  people.  Usually, base form + ing describes things.

It is a little tiring but …….

I’m very excited to attend this evening class.   This evening class is very exciting.

 

I sometimes do martial arts, takkeon.

I sometimes do takkeon.

To sleep enough and to eat healthy food is also important way to keep fit but Koreatech don't allow that.

Form simple present tense

Subject + don’t or doesn’t + base form\

   Koreatech = third person singular\

Koreatech doesn’t allow that

Even though you sleep well and take exercise every day, if you eat unhealthy food like a junk food or eat only what you want, you will get sick.

take exercise

do exercise

Usually I go to bed at 2A.M., so I'm so tired every morning.

Nice job!

I agree, jason.

jason

Jason.  Capitalize the names of people, even the names of unimportant people like your English teacher.

I always drink water,and it keeps my fit very well.

it keeps my fit

It keeps me fit

I also do push ups in my spare time. I do push ups some. But I often do.

Incorrect use of a conjuction.

push ups some

word order        / I do some push ups.

I often do.

Missing object              /     I often do them.