Tuesday, April 1, 2014

week 2 corrections


Week 2 corrections

And I sometimes play food volleyball with my friends.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much. So if i were hungry, i didn't eat too much.

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much.

Form           to + not + base form

I think the best way to keep fit is to not eat too much.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much, so if i were hungry

if i were hungry, i didn't eat too much.

Not real, but possible             conditional

If I were hungry, I wouldn’t eat too much.

I like playing basketball, so I play a basketball with my friends at weekend.

Play basketball

Exercise is a great way to keep fit. I always do fifty push ups and I play table tennis 2 times a week. I run when I feel good. I sometimes play badminton with my friends at the courts near my apartment

Nice job!!

I sometimes walking and go jogging at night.

Missing verb

Go walking

I usually eat rice, eat fruit.

I usually eat rice and fruit.

I usually eat rice and I eat fruit.

 

 

 

Actually, I seldom exercise and play sports.

seldom

other frequency adverbs        rarely, hardly, often, frequently

Good job!

I often stretch muscles of legs.

I often stretch my leg muscles.

In fact, I do seldom excercise for keep fit regularly. It doesn't mean 'I don't like excercise'. I just do excercise for fun.

Word order

I seldom do exercise

for keep fit regularly

to keep fit

I wake up every morning and 30 minutes in the morning and exercise before going to push up the habit of more than 10 times also use the stairs instead of using the elevator and walk to the nearest distance.

Don’t use Google Translate.

I like play table tennis, badminton. But nowdays I don't do exercise,.Because I'm busy.

Form

Like + to + base form, like + base form + ing

Incorrect use of a conjunction

It is little tired but I can feel that my body is cleansed.

Form

Tired                base form + ed, base form + ing         can be used as adjectives.

Usually, base form + ed describes  people.  Usually, base form + ing describes things.

It is a little tiring but …….

I’m very excited to attend this evening class.   This evening class is very exciting.

 

I sometimes do martial arts, takkeon.

I sometimes do takkeon.

To sleep enough and to eat healthy food is also important way to keep fit but Koreatech don't allow that.

Form simple present tense

Subject + don’t or doesn’t + base form\

   Koreatech = third person singular\

Koreatech doesn’t allow that

Even though you sleep well and take exercise every day, if you eat unhealthy food like a junk food or eat only what you want, you will get sick.

take exercise

do exercise

Usually I go to bed at 2A.M., so I'm so tired every morning.

Nice job!

I agree, jason.

jason

Jason.  Capitalize the names of people, even the names of unimportant people like your English teacher.

I always drink water,and it keeps my fit very well.

it keeps my fit

It keeps me fit

I also do push ups in my spare time. I do push ups some. But I often do.

Incorrect use of a conjuction.

push ups some

word order        / I do some push ups.

I often do.

Missing object              /     I often do them.

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