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I major Mechatronics digital system. and
I`m junior.
And I grew up in a Incheon. There are big
and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport.And there are
beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle,
you must passing there
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic
point. because There has international airport and harbor
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to
speak in English to someone.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just
tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash
decision. But, ironically it is demerit
that i have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played
all day long last year. So i couldn`t
studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’.
So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a
state called Gwangju.
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ReplyDeleteI major Mechatronics digital system(.) And (I`m junior.)
I major mechatronics digital system and I’m a junior
And I grew up in (a) Incheon. There are big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport(.And) there are beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must (passing) there
And I grew up in Incheon. There are big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport, and there are beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must pass there
I grew up (Incheon.) There is a major traffic point(. Because) (There) has international airport and harbor
I grew up in Incheon. There is a major traffic point because there has international airport and harbor
Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak in English (to someone)
Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak to someone in English
If anyone (wanna) play soccer with me, just tell me!
If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that (i) have a lot of things on my mind.
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And (my another) Hobby, computer games.
And another Hobby, computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that (i) played all day long last year. So (i) couldn`t studied well....... But (i) really like my school. (aren`t) you think so too?
I like suddenattack so much that I played all day long last year. So I couldn`t studied well....... But I really like my school. Aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that (mean) seize the day.
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day
I’m from the (south korea). I grew up (in a state called Gwangju.)
I’m from the South Korea and I grew up in Gwangju
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DeleteI() major () Mechatronics digital system(.) and I`m () junior.
→I'm major in Mechatronics digital system and I'm a junior.
And I grew up in a Incheon. There are big and famous (airport name of) Incheon International Airport.And there are () beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must (passing) there
→And I grew up in Incheon. There are big and famous Incheon International Airport. And there are a beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must pass there.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point(.) because (There) has international airport and harbor()
→I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point because there has international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, (It) is hard to speak in English to someone.
→Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak in English to someone.
If anyone (wanna) play soccer with me, just tell me!
→If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is (that) I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
→My merit is what I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision, but ironically
And my another (Hobby)(,) ()computer games.
→And my another hobby is playing computer games.
I like (suddenattack) so much that (i) played all day long last year. So (i) couldn`t studied well....... But (i) really like my school(.) aren`t you think so too?
→I like SuddenAttack so much that I player all day long last year. so I couldn't study well....... But I really like my scool, aren't you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. ( So) My motto is ‘carpe diem’ (that) (mean) seize the day.
→My favorite movie is 'Dead Poets Society', so my motto is 'carpe diem' means seize the day.
I’m from the south korea(.) I grew up in (a state called) Gwangju.
→I'm from South Korea and I grew up in Gwang-ju.
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ReplyDeleteI major Mechatronics digital system. and I`m junior.
ReplyDelete->I'm major in Mechatronics digital system. And I`m junior.
And I grew up in a Incheon. There are big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport.And there are beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there
->And I grew up in Incheon. There are big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport. And there are beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
->I grew up in Incheon. There is a major traffic point. Because There has international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
->Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
->If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
->My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
->And my another Hobby is computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
->I like suddenattack so much that I played all day long last year. So I couldn`t studied well....... But I really like my school, aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
->My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
->I’m from the south korea and I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
I major Mechatronics digital system and I’m a junior.
ReplyDeleteAnd I grew up in Incheon. There is a big, famous airport named Incheon International Airport, and a beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on a trip riding a bicycle, you must pass there.
I grew up in Incheon. There is a major traffic point because there has an international airport and a harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak to someone in English.
If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And another hobby, computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that I played all day long last year. So I couldn`t studied well....... But I really like my school. Aren`t you?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
I’m from South Korea and I grew up in Gwangju.
Identify and correct the mistakes
ReplyDeleteI am majoring in Mechatronics digital system and I`m a junior.
And I grew up in Incheon. There are big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport and there are beautiful canal with cycle track so if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there.
I grew up in Incheon. There is a major traffic point. Because There has international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak in English to someone.
If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision but ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby is computer games.
I like ‘suddenattack’ so much. I played all day long last year. So I couldn`t studied well....... but I really like my school.
Aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
I’m from the south Korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
My major is Mechatronics digital system and I'm a junior.
ReplyDeleteI grew up in Incheon. There are big and famous Incheon Air Port and There are beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go trip using bicycle pass there.
I grew up in Incheon. Incheon is major traffic point. Beacause there are international airport and havor.
It is hard to speak English to someone, because I'm an introvert.
If someone wanna play soccer with me, Just tell me!
My merit is that I'm prudence. Because of my merit, I don't rash decision. But ironically. It is demerit that I have a lot of think on my mind.
And my another hobby is computer games.
I like Sudden Attack so much and I play game all long while last year. So I couldn't studied well... But I really like my school, don't you think so too?
My favorite movie is 'Dead Poets Society'. So my motto is 'carpe diem' that mean seize the day.
I'm from The South Korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju
I major Mechatronics digital system. and I`m junior.
ReplyDelete-> I major in Mechatronics digital system and I'm a junior.
And I grew up in a Incheon. There are big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport.And there are beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there.
-> And I grew up in Incheon. There is big, famous airport that named of Incheon International Airport. There is a beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must to pass there.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
-> I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point because there has international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
-> Because I'm an introvert, it is hard to speak in English to someone.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
-> If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
-> Prudent is my merit. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
-> And my another hobby is to play computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
-> I like `Suddenattack` so much that I always played last year. So I couldn`t studied well....... But I really like my school, aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
-> My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.